Your title is fine. Your fields are empty.
Brand filled in, everything else left blank. It is the most common shape of a struggling eBay listing and it is invisible to the seller, because the part they can see reads perfectly well.
Where the effort goes, and where it counts.
A seller with a listing that will not move rewrites the title. Then rewrites it again. Meanwhile the item specifics — style, size, colour, material, department, fastening — are a dropdown list that took no writing and got no attention, and those are the fields eBay's own seller guidance treats as the structured data behind search and behind the filters buyers narrow with.
This produces a specific, quiet failure. The listing is not badly written; it is thinly described. A buyer filtering to UK 9, white, lace-up will never be shown an item that left all three blank, however good the title is, because the listing never claimed to be any of them.
The other thing worth knowing before you pay for a rewrite: "free postage" with the cost folded into the price is not a clever move. eBay weighs what the buyer actually pays, and a headline that hides £4 of postage inside a £45 price competes against an honest £42 plus £3.99 on the same total while looking worse on the number buyers sort by. The report will take the fake free postage out. If that is not what you wanted, this is not the job for you.
A real listing, before and after.
From the eBay rubric the job is briefed with. The seller had done nothing wrong that they could see.
Title NIKE TRAINERS SIZE 9 GREAT CONDITION L@@K MUST SEE FAST POSTAGE
Item specifics Brand: Nike. (everything else left blank)
Description Nike trainers, worn a few times, good condition, any questions ask. Free postage!
Price £45, postage: Free
Title Nike Air Max 90 Trainers UK 9 White/Grey Mesh Lace-Up Used Good Condition
Item specifics Brand: Nike · Style: Air Max 90 · UK Shoe Size: 9 · Colour: White/Grey · Upper Material: Mesh/Leather · Type: Trainers · Department: Men · Fastening: Lace-Up
Description Nike Air Max 90 in white and grey mesh/leather, UK size 9. Worn approximately [ADD FACT: number of wears], general condition good with [ADD FACT: any visible sole wear or marks — see photos]. Original box [ADD FACT: included/not included]. Dispatched within [ADD FACT: dispatch time] via [ADD FACT: courier/service].
Price £42, postage: £3.99 Royal Mail Tracked 48
Seven specifics went from blank to filled. That is the whole change in ranking terms, and it took no writing at all — the words were already in the seller's head, they simply were not in the fields.
"L@@K" and "MUST SEE" are gone because they are against eBay's listing policy rather than merely dated. And note what did not happen: nothing upgraded "used, good condition" to "like new", nothing invented a model number or a product identifier, and nothing asserted the trainers are genuine. An identifier guessed rather than supplied miscatalogues the item, and an authenticity claim you did not evidence is the kind eBay takes seriously.
What happens when you pay.
- Paste the listing exactly as it is. Include the item specifics — even the blank ones, described as blank. That is the single most useful thing you can tell it, and a public link is fine if you would rather not copy it all out.
- £7, once. Seven thousand points. This job holds a ceiling of 3,500 and charges only what the report actually costs, so the remainder stays yours for the next listing or a different job entirely. Three revisions come with it.
- A ranked report comes back. Score, the worst problems first, a rewritten title inside eBay's length, the specifics to fill and what to put in them, a rewritten description, and the things you have to go and check yourself.
A generation that fails costs nothing.
Honest fit.
This will help if
- Your listing sits in search with impressions and no watchers.
- You have never filled in item specifics beyond brand.
- You are selling secondhand and cannot judge how much of the wear to admit to.
- You are a business seller and are not sure what your listing has to say that a private seller's does not.
- You have copied a title style from a competitor and suspect it is against policy.
This will not help if
- You want the condition talked up. It will not turn "used, good" into "like new" without evidence, and that is the whole point of it.
- You want a product identifier found for you. It will ask you for the EAN or MPN rather than guess one.
- Your item is priced wrong. It reads a listing; it does not price a market.
- You want free postage kept as a headline while the price carries it. It will unpick that every time.
Have it read.
Paste the listing and the specifics. The report opens with what is missing, because on eBay that is almost always the answer.
One payment, no subscription. 7,000 points; this job's ceiling is 3,500 and it spends only what it uses. Three revisions included.